It wasn't like any other moment
Yes the clocked ticked
And a little girl laughed outside
But it wasn't the same
Same as every other day i lived
Because the night before
I thought i saw you
Walk in through that open door
The t.v was on, but i saw only you
The radio was on, but i heard only you
When the rainy air blew into the house
It was the scent of you i inhaled
This is true, this is not a foe
Because the night before
I thought i saw you
Walk in through that open door
The time
Wasn't like any other
Even during that night
And I saw the moonlight
It glowed on me with a smile
Said to me, 'very soon
You are goinno stop walking that mile'
It was the night before
That i thought i saw you
Walk in right through that open door...
18 comments:
Who is this about? and how is d singin going???? GOODLUCK
oh yeah......
:-)
Jay you in love....
who is this person walking through the open door?
I am so nosy I know..
Its called love....
I see you are now wearing each others 'pins'. Do I approve? Do you care whether I do, or not?
@O.N.B...am i not allowed to dream now? Abeg...lol...you mean the practicing? Its going fine oo! I do practice everyday. 2nd Feb is right around the corner and thats the day my fate is goinno be brought forward. Keep praying for me ooo!
@Pamela...bwahahahahahahahaha...yeah..i'm in love alright...lol..
@Pardon you...you think so? Okay. And hey you? Last time i asked who were you, coz you know my name, but i dont think i know you.Who are you really? Pliz dont make me think who i think you are, coz it'll be the last time you see your comment published.
@P.S..**sigh**..(not of relief)
Exasperation?
@Perfect Stranger...not really. Frustration to be exact.
Hmmmmmm…what a nice one. I didn’t know you are that good at poems....!! You never seize surprising blogville.
Look guys, this lady just progressed in the Botswana Popstar 2…..and for the very first time she is into poems?
Gosh, blogville is rich in talent…hidden… I know in here there are those capable of knitting a nuclear weapon…lol…
But that’s a nice poem and certainly reading in between lines, it surely must be goino someone out there…we just wonder who that special one could be….He better check it out oooo!! Otherwise?…..
The t.v was on, but i saw only you
The radio was on, but i heard only you
When the rainy air blew into the house
It was the scent of you i inhaled
Jay? With all that noise? Ok I think you must have been dreaming and that’s how it went..huh!? True dat? Unless it was a drizzle..
But well, I envy that talent in you…The world is full of contracts…I would love to sign one with you…..Can you give me some of your talents now? Look here: a good writer, a ‘good poet’, a good dancer-I bet on this one…I mean you love partying and who is this world loves partying without an inside desire to learn new strokes…
Then she is a good singer…Now with all these? Don’t you think others will be wasted? I need some ooo!! So are we good for a deal? I need that part…. “good singer”…yes that one…lol..i guess we have signed the deal…
Now when do I pick my side of the deal? It should be sooner nooooow?....lo
But but..there is only one cure for that condition.......
hi, am new here. beautiful post. gd luck wit rehearsals. go get your dream girl!
am lost with these dialogues oo, anyways, ensure u practice well cos i want to hear good news come feb 2nd.
all the best dear
@Eddiie...God works miracles you know? I wonder why He chose to gimme all those. Thats too handy now, dont you think? Okay don deal then, will pass to you the talent for singing..lol..which part are you? soprano, alto or baritone? Coz i can do all three.If only you promise you ownt misuse that one oo! Coz thats the one i treasure?..
@P.S...whats the cure?
@Antipop..and you are so very welcome. I'll do my best oo! God willing, i'll altimately get the crown. Thanx for stopping by...
@Ms.Emotions...my sista, i promise you good news oo! I hope you are still praying for me?
looks like someone is in love.
Hmmmm...thanks
Things are great in your life huh............ new love, auditions.
Bet your floating around with a big grin on your face.
Happy new year darling!!!
@Anony gal..:)
@Eddiie..pleasure's all mine..
@Candybox...Glory be to God ooo! You bet right. Especially that its said when you smile, you'll get more younger..lol..i donno how true that is, but i really wanna stay a lil young so that i can live to persue my other dreams..thanx for stopping by..
@Omosewa...OMO Babe! So you are still walking this earth eeh? Ha! Girl where have you been? Happy New Year to you too...
ok, so Jaybabe is in love.Thatz a beautiful poem, girl
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